Sunday, November 24, 2019

A juicy business opportunity

Hello everyone!

I'm late for this one (sorry about that!) but the challenge prompt for the
first fortnight of November in the Sylvanian Families Collectors Community was:

Challenge #21: Gratitude

As the year’s harvest comes to a close, autumn is a wonderful time for Sylvanians to express gratitude for all sorts of things: a successful harvest, a full cupboard, family and friends, good health, warm clothing, comfortable homes, and all the abundance that comes with life in the forest.

There are many ways for Sylvanians to express gratitude. Some villages may celebrate gratitude with a harvest festival, feast, ritual, or other special event. Individuals might make a gift or write a special thank you message to a family member or friend. Gratitude can be expressed simply or extravagantly, in village-wide events, within families or small groups, or between individuals.

Make an item or items, photograph a scene, write a story, or do whatever inspires you to do something creative around the Gratitude theme!


And here's my contribution to it. Hope you enjoy it!

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It was a chilly morning in the village of Arcfield, as Autumn was already in full swing and Winter was swiftly approaching. Nicholas McFarlane, the village's mayor, was saying goodbye to Arcfield's newest resident, Miss Ophelia Blackberry. They had just finished signing all the necessary documents in his home.
"And now that all the paperwork is done," he said, smiling, "you're officially a resident of Arcfield, Miss Blackberry. It's an honour for me to be the first one to officially welcome you here. I'm sure you'll enjoy living in our village!".
"Thank you very much for your help, Mr McFarlane. I'll just be on my way now". Not saying anything else, and barely giving him a slight smile and wave, Ophelia Blackberry turned around and started walking down the road that led back from the mayor's house up in the hill to the village itself. 

Nicholas couldn't help but think that she was a little strange. A young woman such as her, appearing out of nowhere and coming to live alone to a small village like Arcfield? She didn't speak much, and apparently hadn't told of her past to anybody. Still, Nicholas hoped that the friendly atmosphere in the village would help her relax and eventually open up a bit. He was certain that the residents of Arcfield could help her heal whatever wounds she might be hiding in her heart.
Or maybe she simply preferred to be left alone. He couldn't be sure, but she didn't really strike him as a timid person. Shrugging, he went back into his home. As mayor, there was always so much to do!



On her way towards her small new home, Ophelia passed by the town square. The Harvest Festival was already in full swing in Arcfield, and many of its residents had set up stalls and carts to advertise and sell their goods and food. Two of such residents were Arthur and Molly Waters, who were selling their home-grown produce on their fruit cart. Their fruit looked very appetizing, plump and shiny, and so it caught Ophelia's attention.

"Good day, Miss Blackberry" Arthur smiled when he noticed that Ophelia was looking at his fruit. "Could I interest you in some fruit? I can assure you it's delicious!"



Ophelia didn't have time to reply, as Molly Waters suddenly appeared at their side, smiling brightly at her. She had been attending to another customer, but had quickly sent them on their way as soon as she had spotted Ophelia. Molly was very interested in this quiet, lonely girl, who was a mystery wrapped in an enigma. She swiftly and abruptly interrupted her husband and took control of the conversation.
"Oh! Dear Ophelia, what a pleasure to see you here! Would you like to try one of our oranges? Come here, come here, I'll weigh one for you... Even better, two!"



Mrs Waters quickly led Ophelia away from her husband and next to the weight they had installed on their cart.
"Mrs Waters, wait a moment..." muttered Ophelia, but to no avail, as Molly ignored her and just kept talking and carefully weighing the fruit.
"My husband wasn't lying, you know? Our fruit is the absolute best around. We grow it ourselves, see? Whether you eat it as is or use it to make a pie, we guarantee the best flavour!"
"Mrs Waters..." 
"Oh my, my dear, please, just call me Molly!". Molly Waters' smile was as bright as the sun. Ophelia slowly blinked, twice, and finally managed to utter a complete sentence.
"Molly, please... I'm grateful for your kindness, but I don't currently have any money on me".



At these words, Molly Waters smiled even wider, if that was even possible, and quickly put the oranges in a basket to give to Ophelia.
"Oh, but that's no problem, no problem at all! Here, take them, consider them our welcome gift to you. Take some pears and grapes before you leave, too. Have you already finished your paperwork with mayor McFarlane, good old Nicholas?"
"Ah, well, yes..."
"Of course, of course, I knew it! I thought you had come from the hill. Don't worry about the money, please don't! All I ask is that when you come by my house to return the basket, you stay for tea and a little chat, hmm?"
"Oh... Well, yes, I guess I can do that". Ophelia seemed somewhat taken aback, and her voice was soft, but she nodded. "Thank you very much, Molly. And you, Mr Waters".
"Don't worry about it" said Arthur, smiling softly at her. "And just Arthur is fine".
"Thank YOU, my dear!" Molly Waters was over the moon at the perspective of learning all about young Ophelia's life and past. "And welcome to Arcfield!"


After Ophelia left, Arthur approached his wife, a frown on his face.

"You were too pushy, Molly. Do you really care about her past and her reasons for moving in so much? What if the girl just wants to keep it private? It's really none of your business".
"Ah, nonsense, nonsense, Arthur! I just want to make her feel welcome, I just invited her for tea, that's all! I want to be her friend, she's always all alone, the poor thing! It's that so bad, really? Don't be such a grump! It makes you look old".
Arthur sighed. He adored his wife, he truly did; he admired her generosity and honesty, and loved her candour and warmth, but he found her prying ways truly annoying at times. He knew it was futile to argue with her, so he decided to just drop the subject.



The following afternoon, Ophelia Blackberry knocked on the Water's door. Molly was delighted, as she was expecting her. She went out to invite her in... And was very surprised to see that she was carrying a huge blackboard with her.

"Welcome, dear Ophelia...! Oh, but what is this, my dear? It sure looks like it weighs a ton!"
"It's... indeed a little... heavy. Molly." Ophelia was out of breath; she left the blackboard on the floor with a deep sigh. "I've brought it because... because I'd like to make you and your husband a... a business proposal".
The expression on Ophelia's face was deadly serious, and Molly was quite astonished, so much that she didn't even know what to say. And that was rare for her! She had expected to have a heart-to-heart with Ophelia, sharing the tea and cookies she'd made for them both. But, a business proposal? She sure hadn't been expecting that.
Taken aback, she called her husband so that he'd help the young rabbit take her huge blackboard inside.



Once everything was ready, and the blackboard had been installed on the Waters' living room, Ophelia asked the couple to sit down on the sofa and began her presentation. She was quite earnest, and Molly was so shocked that she didn't even think of bringing out the tea and cookies. Only the coffee Arthur had been drinking was on the living room table. The afternoon was surely shaping up differently from what she had expected!

"First of all" Ophelia said, solemnly, "I wanted to thank you for the delicious fruit you gave me. I enjoyed it very much; this is why, being that I am new in town and that I do not yet have a job, I'd like to propose you a business collaboration. And what I'm proposing is that you sell me some of your fruit, which I will use to make juice and jam. I will, of course, clearly announce that they're are made from your delicious fruit. This will thus benefit us both".

The Waters couple were astounded. It was the first time someone proposed something like this to them, and besides, it was quite surprising to see Miss Blackberry talking so much, and in such a resolute way! She was normally so reserved and quiet! She attentively studied her reactions, and then kept talking:

"How many pieces of fruit do children need to eat per day? How many do your children eat, Molly and Arthur, even though you grow the fruit yourselves? I'm sure you have to fight with them sometimes to get them to have their daily rations. But, what do children love? Precisely, juice and jam. One glass of fresh juice contains a great portion of the vitamins children need to stay healthy. And it's also wonderful for adults, of course!"
After making a small pause to clear her throat, she continued.
"Furthermore, I'm sure that, even though you work so hard to harvest your delicious fruit, there's a lot that goes to waste; pieces that don't look good enough to sell, for example, but that I could use for my juices and jams. If we collaborate, we'll be able to use your whole harvest, sell delicious fruit, juice and jam to the villagers AND make a profit!".

As she finished her proposal, Ophelia breathed deeply through her nose and stared at the Waters, waiting for their reply. Since they didn't immediately react, she uttered a final sentence:

"And that is why I'm proposing that we work together". Her voice sounded a bit softer, her adrenaline levels lowering. "If you'd like, of course". 
Finally, Arthur Waters let out a laugh and started clapping. Molly looked at her husband, smiled, and started doing the same. 

"Now, that's an entrepreneuring young woman if I ever saw one! I think you managed to convince us!".

Ophelia blushed almost imperceptibly and gave them a tiny smile. Molly thought that she seemed happy, and felt like she was already starting to understand her a bit better; and she hadn't even needed to ask any questions!


Several days later, the big day arrived at last! Ophelia had been tirelessly working on her fresh juices and jams using the Waters' delicious fruit, and she was now slowly carrying her things to a bench that was near where the Waters usually parked their cart. She hoped no one would mind if she sold her products there until she could get something better.


So, as you can imagine, she was very surprised when Mr Waters appeared with her sons, Fred and George, carrying a big piece of furniture and a small table!
"Oh? What's this?" she asked, confused.
"Well, you see" Arthur Waters said "Even though I run the fruit cart with my wife and we grow our produce together, I'm also quite good at building and fixing things; and since we're now business partners, I figured you needed a place to properly sell your delicious juice! You'll even have room to display some fruit on it".


"And I also made you a small table for your juice makers and jams. You can set your things as you'd like, of course!" Arthur smiled as he looked at Ophelia and at the furniture he had made for her. He looked quite satisfied with his work.
Ophelia was speechless. She stared at both pieces of furniture, dumbfounded. It even looked like Molly had sewn a small mantelpiece for the juice bar.
"But... Arthur, Mr Waters... I... I can't pay for this".
"Pay? Who has said anything about paying? There's no need; as I mentioned, this is simply part of our business collaboration". Still he smiled sincerely at her. 
Ophelia opened and closed her mouth several times, looking for something to say, but couldn't find anything. She couldn't believe the Waters where being so nice to her, when they barely knew her at all. Her feelings overwhelmed her, and brought tears to her eyes. She wiped them with the back of one hand and looked at Arthur, her voice slightly trembling.
"I'm... I'm so grateful. Thank you, thank you very much!".
"You're welcome, of course!".


And that was how young Ophelia Blackberry ended up working with Arthur and Molly Waters, selling delicious fresh juice and homemade jams using their carefully grown fruit. Her products are quite popular in Arcfield already! I wonder if Molly managed to learn of her mysterious past, of if she has decided to give her some space for now!

I tried to reflect the theme for the challenge by incorporating both the Harvest Festival and the gratitude Ophelia felt for the opportunity and the help the Waters gave her. 

Hope you enjoyed this story, and sorry it took so long to get it finished!

Have a wonderful rest of November!

10 comments:

  1. Your story was worth the wait, Ayrell! I loved the interaction between the Waters couple and also their dealings with the mysterious Ophelia. I do like your character development and continuity with earlier tales.

    I think writing short blog stories like we do - concentrating on compact scenes and the exchanges between characters - builds them up a bit at a time and helps give them more depth. Different events showing different aspects of their personality, with time to grow. This tale is a prime example.

    Great story.

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    1. Hello Jackson!

      Thank you very much for your message, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Since it took so long for me to complete I was afraid it wouldn't turn out very well, but I think everything kind of fell together in place at the end.
      I agree with you regarding character development. Character interaction and development is what I enjoy the most, both when writing and when reading/watching fiction, so I'm happy you think it's working in my stories!

      Thanks again, have a great rest of the week!

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  2. WOW. Just wow. I love it, I think this was my favourite entry for the gratitude challenge! I was saving reading this story until after my exams finished and what a treat to read it was! Nicholas McFarlane seems to be a wonderful mayor, he was being so kind and welcoming to Ophelia. The Waters sell some gorgeous produce, they must have a huge orchard! How do they have time to do everything? Running a stand and managing an orchard as well as being a family all at the same time must take a lot of organization. Molly is very welcoming too, but I think is a bit overwhelming in her welcome! Is she usually this talkative? I like the wallpaper in the Waters house, did you buy it or print it out? Ophelia's business proposal is very impressive, she is such a clever rabbit! I'm convinced that her stand will be very popular among the residents of Arcfield. Her finished stand goes well with the fruit wagon that the Waters have. Speaking of the Waters, were you thinking of the Harry Potter Weasley family? Or is a coincidence that you have named them Molly, Arthur, with sons Fred and George? Also, what did you use as the floor in the fruit wagon scenes? I don't recognize it but it looks great. Thanks for the wonderful story!
    Hugs, Emily and the villagers of Dandelion Creek.

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    1. Hi Emily!

      Thank you very much for your lovely and kind comment! :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed my story, and hope it helped you unwind after your exams! I'm very fond of Mr McFarlane myself, and you're right regarding the Waters! Fred and George are a handful, too, and they also have twin babies, so they must be quite organized, as you said! Their names are definitely following a Weasley theme, as you noticed, haha! Molly does indeed have an overwhelming and pushy personality, and she's very talkative indeed (I intend for this to be one of her personality traits, so I'm happy it shone through!) If you check out my Bake-Off story, where she first appeared, you'll see: https://arcfieldvillage.blogspot.com/2019/09/the-annual-bake-off-at-brick-oven-bakery.html

      I printed the wallpaper in the Water's living room. It's from here (my favourite site for wallpapers!): https://www.jennifersprintables.com/floral003.html

      The floor in the wagon scenes came with the Brick Oven Bakery Gift Set, and it was one of the reasons I decided to get it!: https://sylvanianfamilies.fandom.com/wiki/Brick_Oven_Bakery_Gift_Set

      It has a stone texture on one of the sides, and the other side looks a bit like tiles. It's great and very useful!

      Thank you again for the comment, glad you liked the story! :)
      Have a wonderful rest of the week!

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  3. Hi Ayrell!
    This story really surprised me--it's so good! I loved how the Water's and Ophelia worked together to do something that benefited them both, a true expression of Sylvanian spirit. It was so heartwarming and the pictures were great, and your idea about how they could work together is just fantastic. It also explores personalities and they never got out of character. Just from the start I knew it was be a wonderful story to read! Thanks for making my day even brighter! And don't worry about being late for the Gratitude challenge, since it all happens to us sometimes, besides your story shows how much effort and preciseness you put into it! Great work!
    Emilie and the Maples

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    1. Hi Emilie!

      Thank you so much for your kind comment! I'm happy you enjoyed the story. :)
      I've been really distracted by real life stuff lately and haven't been able to spend as much time with my Sylvanians as I'd like. I'm really behind on the forum challenges! And also on reading everyone's updates. I did read that you recently moved, hope that's going OK!

      Thank you again and have a great week-end!

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  4. Hi Ayrell!
    This story was amazing! It turned out great, and your pictures were beautiful!
    I love how your always develop your characters and this story was no exception! You also kept us intrigued on the mysterious Ophelia and her past. Is there going to be a 'part two', of sorts? I would love to know more about her and discover her hidden past! (no pressure though!)
    I also loved the Waters' living room, and the picture frames on the walls. Are they Sylvanian?
    It was so heartwarming how the Waters were so welcoming to Ophelia, and how they were willing to work together and share their business with her!
    Have a lovely weekend!

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    1. Hi Kelsie!

      Thank you so much for your kind comment! :) I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and the pictures!
      I definitely hope to write more stories focusing on Ophelia Blackberry in order to further explore her past. Glad I was able to catch your interest, hehe!
      The picture frames in the Waters' living room (glad you liked it! :)) are actually hard stickers! I got them in a variety store called TEDi, and they sold 5/6 per package for very cheap!: https://www.instagram.com/tedi.deutschland/

      Thank you once again, have a great week! :)

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  5. Hi Ayrell,
    You already know how much I liked this story! It suits perfectly the theme of Thanksgiving as you manged to combine perfectly the topic of harvest and gratitude. You had such a clever idea! The fruit wagon and Betty´s juice bar were some of your latest additions and I love how you always come up with great ideas to incorporate them into your stories.I wish I could do the same. I have some sets and even families that I bought years ago that are still boxed due to my lack of ideas to introduce them to my village.
    I know this story took you a long time to set up and write but it was worth it. The pictures are also wonderful! You did a great job!
    Have a lovely week!

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    1. Hi Cutata!

      Thank you very much for your kind comment, I'm so happy you liked the story and pictures! :) I try my best to incorporate everything I get into my stories somehow, since I have very limited space at home, as you know. Everything must be useful in some way, hehe! I adore your stories and pictures, as you know, and I'm sure you will get inspired to write about everything you own eventually. I'm looking forward to it! :D It's also always exciting to have new things to open! :)
      What I do when I'm running a bit low on inspiration with a family (it IS hard to think of personalities and jobs for everyone...) is to unbox them and set them on my table for a few days. After looking at them for some time it's like they "speak" to me and I start getting ideas of who they are and what they like. Am I crazy? Haha, maybe a little. :) Just an idea, something that works for me!

      Have a great week! Hugs!

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